Wednesday, 5 August 2020

The Desert Dancer

Before she became the Empress of the Caizar Empire, Mahalia lived a difficult life under the stern guidance of her father, a hard man who sought power enough to raise his clan above all others. Encumbered by the strange powers passed on from her mother, she was outcast by many in the Nine clans. Until Emperor Mafar sought rest among their clan's shelter after a long campaign in the south. It was this single event that changed Mahalia's life forever.

Track: Princess of Persia ~ Faolan Music

Photo Manipulation by me. Used Texture from Sirius-sdz.


Wine flowed freely among the Emperor's men. Their journey had been a success despite the losses. Chieftain Bakir sat with the Emperor ensuring the best dishes were presented to him. He waved for a servant to refill the Emperor's empty wine glass.

"It is an honour to serve you after your campaign My Emperor."
"I thank you Chieftain Bakir for your hospitality. My men have been on the road for many moons and they will be glad of the fine food and drink you have given them."
"I have prepared something special for your entertainment My Emperor." at the Chieftain's signal, music filled the spacious tent. Seven dancers entered and fell into position. As their bodies began to move and sway to the notes of the song, six of them formed a circle around the dancer in the middle. Unlike the other dancers, this one's face was covered with a thin black veil highlighting the sparkling green eyes that gazed out at the audience.

The Emperor's eyes followed the lone dancer silently.
"Ah I see you have an eye for dance My Emperor. That one is my daughter, Mahalia. She is the pride of the clan. An accomplished dancer and our water seer."
"Your daughter has the eyes of a Queen in the making." The Emperor continued to watch her, his fingers tracing the curves of the wine glass in his hands.
"I am doubly honoured by your words My Emperor. If it pleases you, I will have her join us after the dance."
"It would please me greatly."

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This little snippet forms part of a collection of side stories that explores some of the side characters in a bit more depth. In the main story, Mahalia's capacity as a character is simply the mother of Ydros. Not too much time is spent on her or the Queen of Embra as these characters are not the focus of the main story which follows the children of these women and their journey. So I thought it would be neat to have side stories of the characters that don't really get too much time in the spotlight in Daughter of Fate.


13 comments:

  1. I agree, side stories are a great idea. :)
    I love her portrait.

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    1. I really wanted a portrait of her that kind of looked like sand in the background.

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    2. And it worked perfectly! :)

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  2. Short stories are easy to digest Alasse, so giving this intro to your character is a positive one. Love the photo!
    Big hugs,
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    1. I agree, short stories are nice because they aren't too big and are easy to digest. I had taken that photo a few months ago and really wanted to use it!

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  3. I think every character should get a chance to tell his or her story so side stories are a good idea. Mahalia is a real beauty so no wonder she got the Emperor's attention.

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    1. It's also a nice way to get to know the character in more depth I think. It doesn't hurt that her outfit emphasis her eyes too.

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  4. Beautiful photo, she looks perfect in that outfit.
    x

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    1. I think it gives off the vibe I want for her, mysterious and a bit ethereal.

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  5. Great idea with these little snippets - an easy way to share character backgrounds. Love the photo!

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    1. It's also a nice little quick write up so helps to massage the muse and gives a little creative writing practice!

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  6. Such short, but meaningful stories are like a windows to character soul - in few words you can say a lot about them, about their motivations, origins, all the things that shaped them to the people they are now.
    Love the story, and Mahalia's portrait is beautiful. Such mesmerizing eyes...

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    1. I agree, I think that's also why I love writing flash fiction - it's quick and it tells a complete story in very few words. Mahalia is a villain in the making. I originally shied away from making her truly evil but now that I killed off her childhood sweetheart in my story, I think she will become a lot more dangerous now. I've been debating the whole conception of Ydros - the how and why mostly. Well I know how of course, but there's a lot more to it than that and I am pretty certain the Red Cabal are involved. I mean I keep asking myself, how does a sweet kid like Ydros become the ultimate evil. There's gotta be a trigger. I actually finished writing that scene a few weeks ago. So I know what happens. But how I got there was an interesting process.

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